I have written up my finished shot list, which I have adapted from my first draft. I have made sure that i've included lots of different angles for each shot. I am also going to ensure that I leave five seconds before and after I have recorded each shot.
Scene 1
Establishing
shot of wherever he’s going to propose
Long
shot of boyfriend getting all nervous
Cut to
girlfriends face
Cut to
close up of ring in his hand
Cut to
close up of girlfriend’s shocked facial expression
Include a bit of ‘romantic
dialogue’
Close up
of boyfriend putting ring on finger
Close up
of boyfriends face after she says yes
Close up
of girlfriend’s facial expression
Ex boyfriend takes a photograph
2 shot
Close up of girlfriend (go far
away as possible that when zoomed in as much as I can it’s a close up of her)
Zoomed in shot of ring on
finger
Closeup shot of front of the
camera
Covert to black and white
Edit in camera sound
Wear different clothes here and
have in different locations
Cut to establishing
shot of park
-2 Shot
of couple at table medium
-Closeup
of her worried expression over shoulder
-As he
says ‘are you alright….’ Cut to reverse over the shoulder shot
New
boyfriend to girlfriend: are you alright you haven’t been yourself lately?
Scene 2
Show evidence that girlfriend
knows about stalker
Shot from inside the house so you
can see the shadow from someone appearing at the other side of the front door
Medium Shot of letter coming
through letterbox
Close up of letter coming through
letterbox
Another high angle close up –
camera is on the floor and the letter comes through the box
Low angle shot of her looking at
letter
Raise letter up so it takes up the
bottom part of the camera frame
Close up shot of the letter (‘I
can see you’)
Close up of Shot of head in hands
Long shot of couple walking
Medium shot of them walking
2 Tracking shot’s medium behind
and infront of couple
Over the shoulder shot of ex
boyfriend watching them through the bushes (with the camera in his hand)
Zoom in on them with the ex
boyfriends camera and film what he can see through the camera he takes loads of
photos (I see what the camera see’s)
Shots of her running bath
Close ups of her turning on taps
She hears the phone ring
React to phone call – medium shot
and closeup reacting to sound of phone ringing in another room
Cut straight to her in another
room
Have a towel around her
Close up of her picking up phone –
UNKNOWN NUMBER
Raising phone to head looking
ahead – hello (getting increasingly nervous)
Various shots of messages being
written on the mirror
Stand in bath and film her
reaction of when she see’s the mirror
Shot when you see the mirror
yourself
Medium close up and close ups of
her worried reactions
Tracking shots of her wondering
around the house
Back door is open
Goes back upstairs bathroom is
really steamy
Closeup shot of bathroom mirror
steamed up and got writing in
Different angles and distances
Montage
Close up on expressions on face if I get a
shot of anyone doing anything especially alleyway point of view shot
Shots of her looking over shoulder walking
down the street
Alleyway point of view medium shot
In a house she tells boyfriend
she’s being stalked ‘im being stalked by my ex boyfriend’
Show his response
Boyfriend says ‘who is he let me speak to
him’ ‘I’ll put him straight’
Make girlfriend seem vulnerable high angle
shot
Show her waking up alone and
having stalker in the house – close ups of facial expression every movement
should have its own shot
Girlfriend questions boyfriend if he can
protect her all the time – place and dialogue
Confrontation between boyfriend and stalker
LEAVE MY GIRLFRIEND ALONE SHES MINE NOW – where’s this taking place
Lots of shots of ex filming her
through her house, him down by the letter-box
High angle shots of her walking
downstairs
Her desperately trying to phone her boyfriend
Close up shot of his phone ringing but nobody
answering it
Scene 3
Girlfriend finds Boyfriend dead
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